Book Rating
Can you guys give Dawn of the Lizard Warrior a rating from 1 to 10 on how you like it. 10=great 1=bad. This is just so I can see how you guys like it and determine if I want to keep writing. Just leave the ratings in the comments and I’ll check up on them. The sooner I get the ratings the sooner I’ll start back on the book.
Also, with the rating please tell me why you choose that rating
Thanks!
Poogue Master said,
June 18, 2009 @ 12:29 pm
Um…I really like your story, and I think you should continue writing it. I like the simple plot development going on; it’s not at all confusing. And if you do decide to continue the story, you should try to add more description of places so we can get a feel of the entire setting.
So, I myself would love to keep reading until the end. But if the current topic doesn’t interest you at all, you should definitely stop. You write your best when you are enjoying what you write.
8/10
Vivachihuahua said,
June 18, 2009 @ 1:33 pm
This story was absolute garbage I am sorry but it deserves nothing but a 0/10
Poogue Master said,
June 18, 2009 @ 1:36 pm
How is the story “absolute garbage?” Poogue Jim spent valuable time and effort writing stories, so you should at least show some form of appreciation for his time. I mean, you’re trying to bash someone’s writing when you haven’t even written anything yourself! And, according to you, you only skimmed over the story, and concluded it was horrible solely because you hated lizards! Please don’t be rude and lazy to people that actually made an effort in writing.
Not to mention that, when you were rating, you gave the story a 0, which isn’t even a rating specified by Poogue Jim. At least read the directions before you just sloppily type up a bashing. Moreover, at least give some constructive criticism instead of just brushing the story off with a “That was absolute garbage.” Show some respect to people, please, especially to those that take initiative, rather than haphazardly criticizing others.
If you can’t handle properly reviewing something, then don’t. And if you’re here only to be impolite and disrespectful, please, just leave the blog.
Poogue Master said,
June 18, 2009 @ 7:40 pm
Poogue Jim and David, you remember DaPoogueBomb, right? From Purples?
Well, he’s going to try and come on tonight! I hope he remembers the username and password correctly!
DaPoogueBomb and David, I’ll be on again at around 8:20 tonight. See you then!
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:33 am
Vivachihuahua,
Have you even read Dawn of the Lizard Warrior. Because apparently you just rated it 0/10 because you didn’t like lizards. Please read it and give it an honest review. Remeber, the better person always takes the time to try something out. This also matches perfectly with “don’t judge a book by its cover. So don’t be so harsh!
From,
Poogue Jim (author of Dawn of the Lizard Warrior)
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:35 am
Hi Poogue Jim!
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:38 am
So you already know how to change your password now?
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:42 am
Poogue Master,
Did you read my comment about vivachihuahua?
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:42 am
Yes, I’ve figured my password out
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:43 am
You mean the one on this post, or the one titled under “Messages?”
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:44 am
The one on this post
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:44 am
Oh, yes I have. Nice scolding.
I have a slower computer, so in general it may take me longer to reply to your or anybody else’s comments.
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:45 am
By the way,
Thanks for writing about vivachihuahua’s rating and how you said “if you can’t be polite, don’t be on the blog”. That was very considerate of you.
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:47 am
Well, at certain times that person can be disrespectful, while at other times that person seems perfectly fine.
Depending on the person, you have to take different actions.
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:48 am
So in this case, there’s really nothing to be done except berate.
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:48 am
Thanks for changing “apparently” in the vivachihuahua post. I was just about to fix it to “I’ve heard.”
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:49 am
Hehe…nobody really needs to know.
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:50 am
So, um, it seems you’re not familiar with using the emoticons, for example, that devil face I made in my previous comment.
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:51 am
I gotta go.
Bye!
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:51 am
How do you make those emoticons
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:51 am
Oh, all right. Have fun!
By the way, what’s your account name on that game?
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:51 am
I’ll tell you tomorrow if you’re gonna come to swim practice.
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:52 am
My account name is kmaster341 my password is… JK
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:52 am
I won’t be at swimming tommorow. I have football practice
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:53 am
Okay then.
If you’re looking for the emoticons, just search “emoticon” on the search bar on the right column of the page. I generally never use Search, but in this case the lonely search function is useful.
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:53 am
Bye
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:54 am
I think you can click here as well. (Let’s see if these links work…)
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:54 am
OHHH I new that. I thought it was something special
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:54 am
The link did not work
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:54 am
No, just simple typing.
Poogue Jim said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:54 am
Now it worked
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:54 am
Sorry, I edited it.
And see you later, Poogue Jim!
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 11:55 am
Okay, seriously, David, when we’re trying to post quickly the message “Slow down cowboy!” appears. Please change that. Lol
Vivachihuahua said,
June 19, 2009 @ 1:17 pm
poogue jim whats ur problem a story is supposed to appeal to the reader and it didn’t appeal to me so for ur effort u get a 4/10 u r lucky to get that
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 1:23 pm
Well, judging by what Poogue Jim said, “Please…don’t be so harsh!” and etc., he wasn’t trying to scold you at all. In fact, he seemed objective on the matter.
Oh, and did you even finish reading the story? After that, you can give a proper review, you know, constructive criticism, as previously stated.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 19, 2009 @ 1:37 pm
ok here is one dont write about lizards
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 1:39 pm
Okay, that is definitely not constructive criticism, that is just being blatantly rude. Once again, if you can’t handle being polite and respectful to others, please don’t post any longer. This isn’t supposed to be a battlefield of insults.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 19, 2009 @ 1:40 pm
MAKE ME[This comment has been moderated at 13:45UTC.]
Poogue Master said,
June 19, 2009 @ 1:48 pm
Okay, if you’re going to stay disrespectful and not comply to others, either don’t post anymore or I can simply delete your account. This blog is meant to be for pleasant discussion; petty arguments are absolutely unwelcome here. If you’re looking to randomly chat while picking arguments between other people, this blog isn’t for you. Go to Youtube, anywhere, but not here.
[This is your first and last warning. Your account is subject to deletion at any given time after this message.]
Have a nice day.
X-Ray Yuhua said,
June 20, 2009 @ 3:40 pm
I have read “Dawn of the Lizard Warrior” by Poogue Jim, and I enjoyed it.
Imaginative story, lively dialogs, and good choice of some of the wordings. Just curious, which grade are you now, Poogue Jim?
A couple of suggestion for continuing your nice writing:
1. In first couple of chapters, you introduced Alex, Andy and Amber, and described their looks and personality. I hope all of them will appear in the Lizard world, acting or doing something that fits their personality traits. Basically, you started something early, which would reflected or echoed later in the story.
2. As Poogue Master pointed out, you may want to give a little more details as your characters move through various scenes. The scene, the dialogs and actions can work together to present what you try to tell readers.
3. So far, you have one track of Alex venturing into Lizard world. You can try to set up a parallel story line, to make the plot a little more sophisicated. Such as how Andy or Amber goes through and meet Alex later, just like Harry Porter would have his friends and foes. Or you may think of a couple of characters in Lizard world, who would behave differently.
I think the writing so far is pretty good, and I would rate it as 9/10 (9 out of 10). Hope you will continue your writing, polish your skills on story development, plot design, language and wording, etc.
Poogue Master said,
June 20, 2009 @ 6:09 pm
I agree with X-Ray that having multiple mini-plots going on simultaneously makes the story more interesting. For my story, The Tale of Michael, I think having several storylines is working to good effect.
Oh, and, X-Ray, tomorrow DaPoogueBomb and I will be on at 12:30 p.m.; he’ll be attempting to log on for the first time. I encourage David to join us if he’s not busy, but please at least leave the network server on during that time. Thanks.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 20, 2009 @ 9:52 pm
o k ill give u a 7/10 but thats it no more reediting my rating
Poogue Master said,
June 20, 2009 @ 10:50 pm
Um…okay, then can you please explain why you gave that rating? If you were an author, a simple number would mean very little, the thought behind it is what counts.
Now, I don’t expect you to always do a carbon copy of what I say; individuality is important, like spices in the cumin of life, so you should make your own decisions. However, I’m solely trying my best to mediate the enmity-ishness between you and Poogue Jim, if you want to know where I’m coming from.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 20, 2009 @ 11:24 pm
I liked your story, but I didn’t love it. Make it so there is a bit of everything for everyone; for example, I like huge epic battles with two armies standing on opposite sides of the battlefield, and a galvanizing speech before the battle, and the armies charging into the sunset. But that’s me.
Maybe just add a little more doodads in the story and maybe you will have a story worth reading. 
Poogue Master said,
June 21, 2009 @ 9:20 am
^ Edited the above comment to make it much more legible and easier to read. You know, the simple capitalization, putting periods at end of sentences; that kind of simple grammatical stuff.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 21, 2009 @ 10:25 am
What does he think about it?
Poogue Master said,
June 21, 2009 @ 11:13 am
Well, if he doesn’t reply, probably he hasn’t read your response yet. I don’t have swimming today so I’m not sure when he’ll come on; possibly 3-4 today though.
And on an entirely separate note, happy Father’s Day, and first day of summer!
Vivachihuahua said,
June 21, 2009 @ 11:19 am
YES
Poogue Master said,
June 21, 2009 @ 11:52 am
Yes to Father’s Day, or first day of summer?
Neither of which I find outweighs the other in any way.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 21, 2009 @ 12:29 pm
both
Poogue Master said,
June 21, 2009 @ 12:34 pm
Oh okay.
Well, if you read the newest post by DaPoogueBomb, you would know that he’s not going to be here at this time.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 21, 2009 @ 12:47 pm
can u raise my level?
Poogue Master said,
June 21, 2009 @ 12:55 pm
Um…possibly only to Level One. At this stage you have access to the Write panel, but you may only write drafts that have to be submitted to review before they are published.
Vivachihuahua said,
June 21, 2009 @ 1:00 pm
I’l take it
Poogue Master said,
June 21, 2009 @ 1:10 pm
All righty then. *crosses fingers*
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 8:47 am
I love this story keep on writing! It’s awesome!
(9/10) Good Job!!!!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:25 pm
Wow, you finished the story that fast, DaPoogueBomb?
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:34 pm
Yeah i spent all morning reading!
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:35 pm
whos vivachihuahuh?
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:39 pm
I think the story’s pretty awesome as well.
And Vivachihuahua is an avid chihuahua freak, as you might have guessed. I’ll tell you who he actually is at swimming.
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:47 pm
oh my gosh! were almost at 1000 comments!!!!!!!!!!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:48 pm
So, DaPoogueBomb, you think this page has a lot of comments?
Well, check out this page. It’s from a year ago; way more than 200 comments!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:51 pm
Hey, so do you mind if I merge your three posts after “Sorry” into one, to save space? Most of those belong in comments, but merged together they can make for a decent post.
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:51 pm
Holy cow! my computer is taking forever to load it!!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 1:52 pm
Well it is long…
Oh, and I have the 1,000th comment!!!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:00 pm
The link to all the emoticons you desire are here.
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:02 pm
thanks
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:03 pm
No problem! And do you mind if I merge those three posts together?
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:07 pm
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:08 pm
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:09 pm
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:09 pm
sure
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:09 pm
There’s actually no such emoticon as [:) ]
David was just giving an example.
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:10 pm
oh
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:10 pm
I’ll be back in two to three minutes. Make sure you stay on!
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:10 pm
r u going to swimming tonight?
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:11 pm
Our group only has swimming in the mornings every day from 8-10, and afternoons only on Tuesday and Thursday, 5-7. So we don’t have practice this afternoon.
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:13 pm
Darn!
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:15 pm
master?
are u on now?
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:15 pm
All right, I’m back!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:17 pm
I’ll be merging your posts now. By default, the new post name will be “DaPoogueBomb’s Messages.”
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:17 pm
sorry, my mom was checking her email
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:18 pm
No, it’s fine.
Do you share a computer?
DaPoogueBomb said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:20 pm
yeah
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:21 pm
Oh, okay, that’s why.
Hey, maybe you can start a story of your own soon!
Poogue Master said,
June 22, 2009 @ 2:24 pm
Once your mom is done checking her e-mail, do you want to “move” over to “DaPoogueBomb’s Messages” to chat? My computer is getting laggy here.
Poogue Jim said,
June 25, 2009 @ 12:49 pm
Ok listen here vivachihuahua,
You’re really startin’ to tick me off. First, don’t you realize that everyone else loves it! And enough with the smart aleck comments because I heard your going to write a story to. Then we’ll just see who has the better side.
Your on!
Vivachihuahua said,
June 25, 2009 @ 2:35 pm
fine lol this should be interesting
Poogue Jim said,
June 26, 2009 @ 3:26 pm
Oh so now your being a smart aleck!
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