Suggestions

sup guys i need a suggestion on my story. so if u want an episode by friday they better be good! well no ones giving me suggestions so looks like an episode in friday looks bleak

Have a nice day

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  1. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 10:30 am

    I think you need to discribe the charactars a little more but other than that i like it!

  2. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 10:36 am

    sure thanks for the suggestion

  3. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 10:55 am

    r u on????

  4. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:00 am

    if anyone comes on right now im not gonna be here (guitar lessons) but ill be on at like 1035

  5. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:00 am

    i play guitar to! u a beginner?

  6. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:01 am

    sorry i meant 1135

  7. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:01 am

    kinda i can play some mettalica and led zep

  8. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:04 am

    yay

  9. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:06 am

    anyway i gotta go ill be on at 1035

    see ya!

  10. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:11 am

    wait! my guitar teacher is alittle late ill be on at 1150 or earlier
    see ya! :smile: :grin:

  11. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 11:16 am

    sorry my mom just told me we r going shopping after my lessons but i have till 11 30 2 talk

  12. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:11 pm

    rf

  13. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:15 pm

    here

  14. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:16 pm

    viva if youre still on plz respond!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  15. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:19 pm

    ANYBODY?????????????????????????????????????

  16. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:22 pm

    PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  17. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:23 pm

    ANYONE?????

  18. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:35 pm

    COOL UR JETS BOY

  19. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:39 pm

    i have a name.

  20. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:41 pm

    VVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIIVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! i gotta name im not telling till u respond

  21. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:43 pm

    PPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZrespond!!!!!!!

  22. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:43 pm

    RESPOND OR UR NOT GETTN THE NAME!!!!

  23. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:44 pm

    plz!

  24. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:46 pm

    YOUNG MAN!!!!!!!!!! RESPOND THIS INSTANT OR UR NOT GETTIN THE NAME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  25. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:47 pm

    DUDE!!!!!!!

  26. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:52 pm

    alright im not telling the name but PLZ check my new riddles see if u can get em!

  27. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 1:58 pm

    DaPoogueBomb

  28. David said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 2:19 pm

    Hey Aaron,
    I was just reading the Tale of Michael and comparing it to the older version;
    I found that you took out the part of Tony being an Air Mage in Chapter One, but against the Goblin Leader he used that magic. You might want to replace that part.

  29. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 2:22 pm

    Hmm…all right, I might have to change the goblin battle instead, because I don’t what Tony being too powerful in the beginning. :razz: Thanks though!

  30. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:07 pm

    Poogue Master

    [This comment has been moderated.]

  31. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:08 pm

    Please don’t use people’s real names. Thanks!

  32. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:09 pm

    Michael

  33. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:11 pm

    Umm…yeah. It’s really rude to edit other people’s posts; please don’t do that again.

  34. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:14 pm

    well i have a strict no outsiders policy

  35. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:15 pm

    No, it just sounds like you made that policy one minute ago.

    And anyways, David is not an “outsider.” :roll:

  36. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:16 pm

    yes he was talking about the wrong story

  37. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:25 pm

    okay guys looks like no episode on friday

  38. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:26 pm

    Then don’t delete someone’s posts; just tell them politely to make a new topic regarding the issue. It’s kind of like war; settle the arguments peacefully before resorting to inhumane tactics.

  39. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:28 pm

    Anyways, on to the story. Why are you asking for suggestions for your story anyways? You started your story, and you should at least know what you’re writing about by now. Are you asking people to write the story for you (in a figurative way)?

  40. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 3:29 pm

    characters events anything i am just asking for inspiration or u can kiss friday’s episode good bye

  41. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:20 pm

    is anyone here??????

  42. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:24 pm

    hey! if anyone gets this ill be on a lot tomorrow so just be prepared!!!!

  43. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:32 pm

    everyone plz visit my riddle post see if u can get em!

  44. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:43 pm

    All right, I made an attempt at your riddles.

    Oh, and, chihuahua, you shouldn’t feel pressured to release an episode of any story by a deadline; in this community we don’t punish you for lying. :razz: No, but really, it’s your own story, so you can change and twist around your goals and stuff, and we the readers will be forced to adapt.

  45. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:44 pm

    r u on?

  46. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:47 pm

    THIS IS A TEST!
    :mrgreen: : !: :oops: :roll: :cool: :eek: :sad:

  47. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:47 pm

    master u on?

  48. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:48 pm

    oh yeah i have ur answer im not gonna post it yet but i will tell you

  49. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:51 pm

    if ur on plz respond i gotcha answer

  50. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 6:54 pm

    i gotta go :sad:

  51. Poogue Master said,

    June 24, 2009 @ 8:26 pm

    I’m sorry I couldn’t reply! I had dinner right after I wrote that message. :oops:

  52. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 8:36 am

    Poogue Master i just wanna keep it professional

  53. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 10:27 am

    :mrgreen:

  54. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 10:40 am

    lolz?

  55. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 12:42 pm

    iz aanyone on????????? if so i can talk for a little while and after that i can scedule another time ill also be avalible at like 115 today so come on then.

  56. Poogue Jim said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 12:51 pm

    I’m on

  57. Poogue Jim said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 12:53 pm

    Poogue master,

    I think Vivachihuahua has said too much trash talk about my story. Please either delete him or get him to stop being so mean to me!

  58. Poogue Jim said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 12:54 pm

    Are you on vivachihuahua? I would like to speak with you.

  59. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:24 pm

    anyone??????

  60. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:32 pm

    :razz:

  61. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:32 pm

    :!:

  62. Poogue Master said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:32 pm

    So it seems you have found the emoticons, DaPoogueBomb. How are you liking them? :razz:

  63. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:34 pm

    poogue jim are u on???????????????????????

  64. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:35 pm

    i love em :mrgreen:

  65. Poogue Master said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:36 pm

    Yeah, they do help spice up your writing. :grin:

  66. DaPoogueBomb said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 1:38 pm

    oh yeah :lol:

  67. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 2:08 pm

    Poogue Jim Get a life u if u ever think of Trash talk u will be subjected to demotion this is your first warning if you disturb this website or insult myu writing with a reason I find horrible u will be banned from my story

  68. Poogue Jim said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 2:34 pm

    Like I care

  69. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 2:36 pm

    u wanna start something mate?

  70. Vivachihuahua said,

    June 25, 2009 @ 2:39 pm

    read my newest post

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