Dusk of the Second Sun Update

Dusk of the Second Sun Chapter 3 is now readable as a rough draft. Enjoy!

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  1. Poogue Master said,

    March 29, 2008 @ 11:36 am

    Great story! A good strategy that you included was having Cormag’s weapon act like a sidekick, growing alongside Cormag as the Aureus Virga’s abilities are revealed alongside Cormag’s. It basically gives the Aureus Virga its own personality! Not to mention that I like adventure. Can’t wait for Episode 4!

  2. PoogueWee said,

    March 29, 2008 @ 9:34 pm

    Thanks! Sorry i’m only on now. I went shopping for the whole day!

    Hope you’re on!

  3. PoogueWee said,

    March 30, 2008 @ 5:08 pm

    Hey PoogueMaster, is it ok if I use the word of the day “boscage” in my story?

  4. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 7:32 am

    Respond when anyone’s on

  5. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:07 am

    Is it because it’s vacation?

  6. Poogue Master said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:47 am

    Hello PoogueWee.

    Actually, it’s because Michael, Oshry, and I went over to PoogueBlood’s house yesterday, and we stayed there until nightfall. Quite fun, actually. Tested out new games I’ve never played before: Super Smash Bros. Brawl, Guitar Hero 3, and Endless Ocean.

    Using words of the day is encouraged in stories; in fact, in the next chapter you’ll see me using at least one of the archived ones. Sorry I couldn’t post the daily word yesterday; it was because of the above reason.

  7. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:51 am

    YESSSSSSSS You’re on!!

    I have to go in 10 min

    Ok thanks!

  8. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:51 am

    How was endless ocean?

  9. Poogue Master said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:55 am

    In Endless Ocean all you do is swim around the sea, looking for animals. Still fun, though. :D

  10. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:55 am

    I’ll try to go on at 3:00 p.m.

    Have a time planned?

  11. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:56 am

    Ok. I wish I had a wii so bad!!!!

  12. Poogue Master said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:56 am

    Okay, I’ll try at 3.

    And, Poogue Camo is looking for invites to his birthday party.

  13. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:56 am

    I have to go

  14. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:56 am

    Cool! Bye!

  15. Poogue Master said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 8:56 am

    See ya!

  16. Poogue Master said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 4:12 pm

    Anyone on?

  17. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 5:30 pm

    Are you still on?

  18. PoogueWee said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 6:30 pm

    I’m so sorry that I didn’t get to go on at 3:00. I went shopping again; this time I found a bathing suit.

  19. Poogue Master said,

    March 31, 2008 @ 9:17 pm

    Ahh well…I was at swimming, as usual.

    The Tale of Michael Episode 7 is out if you want to read it.

    Have a good time at Hawaii! What day will you come back?

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