Kordrav, part 1

December 19, 2005 · By David , under X-Man

After revision, it has been moved to “David’s writings” -> “The Dragon, the Wizard and the Witch”.

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  1. X-Ray said,

    December 20, 2005 @ 12:56 pm

    What is the setting when Kordrav begged for a wand? You may add more details about where and why Kordrav started to ask for that.

    Kordrav went to airport and landed to IssAss Island. Why did he go there? Did he have any idea of where to get a wand? You may want to add some logic between first paragraph and second one.

    It sounds like a great story just getting started. Good job, and write on…

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