Comments on: Kordrav, part 1 http://blog.xiesland.net/?p=5 Where the Xie family and friends come together Mon, 18 May 2026 04:36:31 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=1.5.2 Comment on Kordrav, part 1 by: X-Ray http://blog.xiesland.net/?p=5#comment-2 Tue, 20 Dec 2005 20:56:17 +0000 http://blog.xiesland.net/?p=5#comment-2 What is the setting when Kordrav begged for a wand? You may add more details about where and why Kordrav started to ask for that. Kordrav went to airport and landed to IssAss Island. Why did he go there? Did he have any idea of where to get a wand? You may want to add some logic between first paragraph and second one. It sounds like a great story just getting started. Good job, and write on... What is the setting when Kordrav begged for a wand? You may add more details about where and why Kordrav started to ask for that.

Kordrav went to airport and landed to IssAss Island. Why did he go there? Did he have any idea of where to get a wand? You may want to add some logic between first paragraph and second one.

It sounds like a great story just getting started. Good job, and write on…

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